Temptation: A Haiku...!!!


tempted once;
they leave scars; rather
permanent

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: Normally we get attracted towards wrong acts...but every action leaves a permanent mark on our life...

Comments

  1. Tarun MazumdarApril 27, 2012 at 12:02 AM

    yes they do, they so do... nicely done there...

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  2. PranitaApril 27, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    Very true...! Good or bad... the repercussions can not be avoided!

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  3. LocomenteApril 27, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    Superb!!!
    Really true...

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  4. Jaideep RaoApril 27, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    Good composition dost!

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  5. LeoPawApril 27, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    So true... And the picture completes the thought. Lovely haiku.

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  6. SurbhiApril 27, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    VERY TRUE SARAB !

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  7. Mohini PuranikApril 27, 2012 at 12:23 AM

    True, really temptations make us weak and then we have to regret too..

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  8. Harshita SrivastavaApril 27, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    true..beautiful creation :)
    humans are after all the salve of emotions and that is why they give into tempatation
    keep writing
    God bless

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  9. Yellow TulipApril 27, 2012 at 1:49 AM

    Yaa Soo true... scars tat make us choose better today only to realise we just fell for another temptation which would leave another scar!...

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  10. carol l mckApril 27, 2012 at 2:06 AM

    So true ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste ^_^

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  11. ElleceeApril 27, 2012 at 4:44 AM

    This is so true. Well done haiku.

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  12. GraceApril 27, 2012 at 4:48 AM

    What a lovely message...its so true ~

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  13. Adura OjoApril 27, 2012 at 4:52 AM

    Deep! Great message to share.

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  14. Adura OjoApril 27, 2012 at 4:59 AM

    I also love the way you punctuated for creative effect. Thank you for your kind words on my post.
    Much appreciated.

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  15. PattiKenApril 27, 2012 at 7:06 AM

    I really like this. It's very thought-provoking.

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  16. Richa ChauhanApril 27, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    Beautiful lines saying bitter truth..

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  17. Mr. WalkerApril 27, 2012 at 6:46 PM

    Nice commentary on the consequences of temptation.

    Richard

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  18. Sri ValliApril 27, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    Lovely haiku with nice moral :)

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  19. AnonymousApril 27, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    Everything and every one we encounter provide us lessons, and help shape who we are ... nicely done. Happy Friday ~~
    Day 27 ~~ My Diet's Expiration

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  20. ChèvrefeuilleApril 27, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    Nicely done.

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  21. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 28, 2012 at 7:30 AM

    Welcome to life, with temptations, scars and all!


    Sniffing Temptation

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  22. BikramApril 28, 2012 at 7:23 PM

    Yes but if we look at those scars then they should remind us not to do anything stupid again .. we should learn from those scars


    Bikram's

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