Hope: A Haiku...!!!



Fingers crossed
lucky omen for
hope, is it?

a lucky omen
really or a result
of mere anxiousness?

anxiousness?
or superstition?
you decide


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)


Comments

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 6, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    makes one ponder... profound thoughts, Sarab..
    nice set.. :)

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  2. PranitaApril 6, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    A different depiction of hope... a gr8 one! :)

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 6, 2012 at 12:41 AM

    My fingers are crossed..May I find an answer..:) Well done ..

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 2:55 AM

      Thanku sir...good luck for the answer... ;):P

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  4. SurbhiApril 6, 2012 at 12:51 AM

    i always cross my fingers when i wish something :)nice 1 :)

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  5. ElleceeApril 6, 2012 at 1:41 AM

    Fingers crossed is known everywhere - many different answers I think. Nicely done.

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  6. carol l mckApril 6, 2012 at 5:18 AM

    contemplative haiku ~ all in the 'eyes of the beholder' ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. GraceApril 6, 2012 at 5:49 AM

    I can only hope for the lucky omen ~

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 2:57 AM

      Thant should be the only thing one must be hoping for... :)

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  8. KajalApril 6, 2012 at 12:30 PM

    so apt... Keeping fingers crossed are indeed an lucky omen for hope..loved it. Very profiund

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 2:59 AM

      Thats what I doubt on... :P
      thanks Kajal... :)

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  9. Andy SewinaApril 6, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    Well mused - I'll go with superstition, it's bad luck not to. Here's hoping!

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 3:00 AM

      exactly man...don't stop hoping...coz hope dies...everything dies... ;)

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  10. ChèvrefeuilleApril 6, 2012 at 2:12 PM

    Great one. Very deep and meaningful. Thank you for sharing this with us and being part of this challenge.

    Namaste

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 3:00 AM

      Thanks KP...you're most welcome...I'm loving it... :)

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  11. Sahithya SridharApril 6, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    nice one.... but i haiku has to be in 3 lines right!!.. if i am not wrong!!!

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 3:05 AM

      thanks Sahi...
      you're right...haiku are of 3 lines and in my post i've written 3 haiku... :)

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  12. Harshita SrivastavaApril 6, 2012 at 4:01 PM

    beautifully written...fingers crossed, a lucky omen or just a superstition ?
    Nice lines..keep writing
    Bless ya!!

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 3:05 AM

      Thank you so much Harshita...GOD bless u too... :)

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  13. Sri ValliApril 6, 2012 at 6:54 PM

    This is beautiful!....we are all superstitious at times!

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  14. magiceyeApril 6, 2012 at 7:36 PM

    :) anxious about superstition?

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  15. LeoPawApril 6, 2012 at 7:41 PM

    omen, anxiety or superstition, if it serves a purpose it's all for good. Like the transition and appreciate the attempt to deviate.

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 3:07 AM

      Yeaaahhh...at last only thing that matters is the result...thanks LEO PAW... :)

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  16. Mohini PuranikApril 6, 2012 at 8:40 PM

    Such an inspirational Haiku..:)

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  17. SimranApril 6, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    Wow!
    Applause for your haiku :)

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  18. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 2:59 AM

    thanks Rama... :)

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  19. CYNOSUREApril 7, 2012 at 3:08 AM

    thanks... :)

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  20. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 7, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    The only thing I'm sure of is: Superstition is not hope!

    Tell Me, Sister Crow

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  21. kaykualaApril 7, 2012 at 8:10 AM

    Anxiousness I think, less of superstition, Cynosure! Anxiosness in anticipation! Great verse!

    Hank

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  22. NehaApril 7, 2012 at 10:45 AM

    Beautiful Haiku :)

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  23. Geeta SinghApril 7, 2012 at 4:26 PM

    wow!!! wat a haiku:)

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  24. Someone is SpecialApril 11, 2012 at 3:03 AM

    fingers crossed.. have to decide..

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