Deserted: A Haiku...!!!




bereft of loved ones,
deserted we are left; as
hard time approaches;


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: Just a perception from a big collection of how one interprets situations in life... :)

Comments

  1. Ramesh SoodApril 2, 2012 at 12:21 AM

    What hard times.. dear.. God has never deserted anyone.. hard times only mean some hard lessons from God...through some hard methods.. As a haiky well done.. RS:)

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 2, 2012 at 12:49 AM

      I completely agree with you RS and also I'm not denying your statement...but times comes when we're the only one left suffering...
      anyways...just another debatable topic... ;)
      Thanks... :)

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  2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 2, 2012 at 1:00 AM

    sometimes, with some people, it does happen..

    again, well put...

    mine's here : http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/02/mine-self-exile-haiku-3/

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  3. GraceApril 2, 2012 at 1:04 AM

    Hard times come and go...it makes us feel deserted but hopefully we can overcome ~

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 2, 2012 at 6:45 PM

      hard times always come up with new lessons... :)

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  4. ElleceeApril 2, 2012 at 1:32 AM

    You always give us thoughtful haiku. I like the line "bereft of loved ones" because sometimes despite ourselves we feel this way.
    Thank you.

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  5. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsApril 2, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    There is an enigmatic beauty in tragedy! Sometimes, physical pain is just when the spirit flowers with exquisite beauty!

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 2, 2012 at 6:52 PM

      a very deep thought GW...beautifully put up...thanks... :)

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  6. Jeannette,April 2, 2012 at 8:09 AM

    everything is grace...even hard times...

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  7. SurbhiApril 2, 2012 at 1:10 PM

    loving yourself is an art and learning this art will never let anyone feel deserted ...as a haiku
    good thought :)

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 2, 2012 at 6:54 PM

      @surbhi...as I've mentioned earlier, at some stage you'll need some for sure...no matter how much you love someone... :)

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  8. AnonymousApril 2, 2012 at 3:42 PM

    Nice

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 2, 2012 at 5:01 PM

    I am left feeling bereft after reading this! :)

    Deserted Branches

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 2, 2012 at 6:56 PM

      hahaha...That was indeed a nice one MMT...thanks...loved it... :)

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  10. carol l mckApril 2, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    Ride the waves of loss ~ part of life ~ well written haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  11. magiceyeApril 2, 2012 at 7:25 PM

    hmmmm

    c'est la vie!

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  12. BikramApril 2, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    such is life my friend , people usually desert us when the time if tough...

    tough times teach us a lot ..

    Bikram's

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  13. Sri ValliApril 2, 2012 at 8:26 PM

    How true! Described the fact of life :)
    Thanks for sharing :)

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  14. Kinara :)April 2, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Bitter truth of life!
    Once again, nicely penned as always!:)

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  15. ChèvrefeuilleApril 2, 2012 at 11:36 PM

    Wonderful haiku, very spiritual.

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  16. CYNOSUREApril 2, 2012 at 11:51 PM

    u r right Ashwini...that's the perfect time to know who are true to us...thanks... :)

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  17. Mohini PuranikApril 3, 2012 at 1:28 AM

    I agree absolutely, beautifully expressed Cyno.

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  18. Someone is SpecialApril 3, 2012 at 1:57 AM

    Hard times are part and parcel of life.. Cynosure image and words..

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  19. AnonymousApril 3, 2012 at 7:35 AM

    Grief, although part of life, is often a hard hurdle to overcome!

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  20. AmitAagApril 3, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    Lovely!

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  21. LeoPawApril 3, 2012 at 8:26 PM

    Lucky are those who finds people to support at the hardest of times in life.
    Though it rings a sad note, its a beautiful hakiu. loved it.

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  22. Harshita SrivastavaApril 4, 2012 at 10:39 PM

    hard times are depressing but we gotta move on...TIME HEALS EVERYTHING!!!!!!
    Great Work...Keep it up

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